Williams1996

I can read and comment on whatever i want lol all im doing is telling the author a lot of people dont like major mind control all the time in stories and wished him well with the rest of it the fact you think no one should be able to critique stories is laughable.

It aint hard have you never picked up a book or read many fanfictions? but since this is a asoiaf and harry potter fanfiction how about the both of them are you happy now? there are also thousands of fanfictions 10s of thousands actually of stories who have magic and dont use mind control.

Im siding with Alan on this one

With perfect genetics you could probably live to about 150

you can have magic in a story without solving everything with mind control.

this only benefits the mc so its a win win for him

an evil naruto who uses his talk powers for evil would be terrifying

A mentally and emotionally stable sasuke is actually kinda scary he would be more dangerous than his already op canon self.

Explain how it isnt on par then it has 7 stages with its 3rd stage being on par with the 4th stage of the 8 gates

lol this is gonna drive the pokemon professors insane trying to figure this shit out