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sirDNA1yrCommentedWas not the first time that you wrote "native" instead of "naive"
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(Tch... Why are these two guys so popular? Are these girls blind? Why is no one paying attention to me! When I was in university, I was the most handsome guy in my dorm room!) - sirDNA1yrCommented
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"Thana remember in the original story the male lead loved the female lead that he would do anything that also includes his stupidity and arrogance he won't listen to anyone but her. His pride and being a hier of the Hu Family made him believe that what ever he does money can solve it." said non- chalantly - sirDNA1yrCommented
I have seen it often that you write "thier" and not "their"
"Thank you dad. I'll be going now bye mom bye dad" said then kiss thier cheeks and went out. Wave at her parents and walk towards the entrance of the school. - sirDNA1yrCommented
you use the word "when" for "went" seen this mistake often
Phobio sat there for another second trying to remember what had happened and finally something seem to click in his mind. His eyes when wide in realisation as he finally remembered what he had done. - sirDNA1yrCommented
you don´t like to write words together I see
It was at that moment that the now very pissed off Charybdis finally reached me. As soon as it was close enough it tried to ram into me, however all that happened was that it when right through me with no effect what so ever. Charybdis seem to be confused for a second as it turned around to face me again. Unfortunately for Charybdis it would never even get the chance to see me. - sirDNA2yrCommented
Author loves blond women that I have found out
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It is about the order that things happen. I would say because she kills them preemptively it seems wrong, and it would have feeled righter if she tried to sneak away and then they had noticed her and then because of this she would have killed then. This is the reason that is missing from my perspective
My reaction to killing somebody slightly surprised me but quickly accepted that this is how I was now. He was somebody who threatened my life so he had to die. - sirDNA2yrCommentedCh 335 The Truth About Her (2)
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Maybe a power that lets her split herself, so that she can fight with all the weapon that she masters. Or a power that lets her link her thoughts or abilities or skills with other.
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fu I also have ears on my head. I am crazy
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where is the Xx...xX
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