TheDeathmail

I want you to know that I did give this a shot up to 30 chapters.... but this story really isn’t for me..... like I get that the gods were enemies in the previous life, but in this life, there is nothing to root for him for.... this feels very empty. It’s just him leveling up and pissing off people and leveling up again. it feels almost like a nothing story.

you are making the demon path way too clearly superior.....

It’s annoying that he has to be antagonistic towards her..... It feels like there’s nothing to actually like about him right now..... like why should we root for him? Just letting him get along with this girl would give him at least one positive thing..... sure he could get revenge on the guards, but that’s a pretty far off thing right now while he’s at the bottom.... and there is only so much face slapping we could handle....

Why does every single novel have to overcomplicate romance?

Please don’t overcomplicate the romance author.... he could just be in a relationship with her plain and simple.... there doesn’t need to be drama or problems with it.... It doesn’t need to be dragged out..... it doesn’t need any issues.... it could literally just be a simple straightforward romance with no trouble....

Why doesn’t he just ask her if she has a cure? He could at least try.

you know one way to clean this up is to make it that when he goes in the time dilation it won’t have any negative effects.... that would actually solve any issues with why the MC isn’t going crazy and at the same time it will make his power seem a bit better.... I mean he’s basically supposed to have God like time powers.... so he should be immune to the negative effects of it

It’s understandable to be a little low-key.... but there’s also just being overboard..... he should join a strong guild and get all the benefits.... there is no reason to lower himself too much.... because if you lower it too much, it doesn’t feel like you are using logic, but that you are following a trope..... and that doesn’t mean following a trope is a bad thing, but it has to be used well and feel logical.... You shouldn’t use a trope just to use a trope.

Here is the raw title: 别胡说，我这是人皇幡 (Don't Speak Nonsense, This is the Emperor's Banner)

Honestly, this feels very unique compared to many other stories.... it feels more slice of life and actually works pretty well....