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dragon723

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I am an avid reader of western fantasy, science fiction and romance. I write my own stories occasionally, but also like coming with commentary and input to others - fair warning, im a grammarnazi XD

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  • dragon723
    dragon7231yr
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    I won't say anything about the stability of updates or the story development since I did not get that far. Hence 3 stars, middle of the pack. What I will say is that world Background makes very little sense as presented and that the whole "everyone bad" vibe makes the story seem a bit meh to me. Its been done a million times with better writing and better motivations. Take the first chapter where there is every chance to characterize the western kingdoms and give them some spirit and motivation for their actions. Instead we are told, not shown, that they are willing to senselessly attack over a glowing rock, that will allow one person to get a powerup. Why would an entire kingdom move over this? What justifies the expenditure of life and resources in getting involved in what is sure to devolve into a five-way war? No explanation, just a handwave about them also grabbing some slaves and land. But if they want that, why not wait till the others are occupied before invading one of them, maybe make deals with their enemies beforehand? Its clearly about the stone and its simply not established as being worth the cost.

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    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • dragon723
    dragon7231yr
    Commented

    Sounds like those rulers were morons then. If you can't hold it, trade it away to someone who can. No matter how weak the kingdom is, it will cost the invaders something to destroy it whether that something is time or resources. As long as you ask for less than that, you can trade for something that is actually useful for the kingdom. Such as vassalage or protectorate status under the stronger kingdom or lesser shards.

    Every kingdom with one or two higher-quality soul shards appearing in its lands but not possessing enough strength to safeguard it or not having a citizen worthy enough to hold it has faced the same fate as its predecessors. They were targeted and annihilated by those eyeing the shards and eventually became a dim part of ancient history.
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    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Replied to Knoxi

    But do I pay a monetary cost, do I accrue an obligation to another, does someone gain power over me, is there in any way a cost to the oxygen itself that I pay? No, not a meaningful one. I need to breathe sure. I also need to pick up the free meal someone gives me and I need to take out my wallet if I want to pay with the free money someone gave me. Those things are still considered free.

    There was no such thing as a free lunch.
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    Host, Please Be Honest! What Exactly Are You?
    Horror · lumydee
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Commented

    How generous of the park to allow him to build a huge haunted house facility. No doubt it has nothing to do with the increased buzz around a massive expansion of their existing facility attracting new customers. Their cost is zero, and at worst they get free advertisement until the park goes under.

    Could it be that removing dirty things can improve my luck? Chen Ge did not think that things would be so coincidental; the thought was merely to humor himself.
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    My House of Horrors
    Horror · I Fix Air-Conditioner
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Replied to SCHWEN

    The cleaver did nothing, he was saved by the dolls moving on their own.

    At the most crucial moment, the ragdolls that were placed around the bathtub started to teeter like they were being blown by winds. The smallest among them tipped over and used its body to block the palm-sized mirror piece completely.
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Commented

    To be honest, the 30.000 is a drop in a bucket, especially once he has paid his taxes. Its equal to selling 3000 tickets to the haunted house. The real boon is what catching a real murderer will do to his online career. That "OH MY GOD ITS REALLY, REALLY REAL????" aura will never rub off.

    "So, there's really a monetary reward?" Chen Ge's lips curved into a smile when money was mentioned. "I asked only for fun. Of course, the reason I did this was not for the money. To be able to contribute to the preservation of peace within this wonderful city of ours is the absolute honor."
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Replied to DragonArries

    Ghosts care about their strong attachments, at least usually. She probably really loved him and now that she is trapped in this warped evil place, well she probably still loves him....

    "I know you think I'm crazy, but everything I've said is the truth." Wang Qi leaned against the wall for support as he pocketed his phone. "More inexplicable things have happened to me. For example, my fiancé's stuff curiously appears in my room without warning; it's like she's reminding me to go look for her."
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Commented

    Time to drink some delicious water.

    "Didn't you say you were thirsty? I came to give you this." The limping man placed the warm water bottle in his hands by Chen Ge's door, and his expression was as unnatural as it could be.
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    My House of Horrors
    Horror · I Fix Air-Conditioner
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Replied to cxw_

    I mean these are haunted house employees. They get used to that kind of thing over time. To them its all in good fun.

    "Think about it, there are only two reason that a coffin could make a sound. One, there's a worker hiding in it waiting to scare us when we open the coffin. Two, there's a hidden machine set-up inside it and activating it will cause some changes to this Minghun scenario. So, no matter which possibility it is, this coffin is crucial to this scenario. If we wish to escape, we have to open this coffin." Gao Ru Xue slapped the lid twice, adding, "Don't hesitate, just pull it open."
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    My House of Horrors
    Horror · I Fix Air-Conditioner
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Replied to Daoist832956

    Morticians do far more than makeup, they make the dead presentable, recognizable for the loved ones so it looks more like they are asleep and less like a corpse. That can mean extensive work when someone has been in a bad car accident or similar.

    Looking at the youthful girl in the mirror, many memories that Chen Ge felt did not belong to him suddenly appeared in his mind. It was a chaotic mess. There was not only knowledge about color-matching and other make-up skills but also human anatomy, physiology, bone structure, and the study of death.
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    My House of Horrors
    Horror · I Fix Air-Conditioner
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Replied to ReiSeirin

    Considering the app already told him he can die during the tutorial and is speaking about him building a team of actual monsters and ghosts, I would have definitely have freaked out if I thought it was for real. Before throwing the phone at a priest or an exorcist.

    After looking through the mission details, Chen Ge gasped with surprise. "The missions in the game have to be completed in real life? Isn't this the perfect proof that this game can influence real life‽"
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Replied to Dark_Zenith

    Courage is mostly based on self-confidence, belief and hope. It doesn't take courage to attempt suicide. It takes fear, self-loathing and hopelessness. Its a cry for help in most cases, not a wish for death.

    "What you believe is the answer. From this moment on, you will officially take over as the new owner of the Haunted House. Of course, this is not something worth celebrating. Before the end of the tutorials, please heed my last advice: suicide is the most cowardice of behavior, and try your best to survive!"
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Commented

    I see so this is set in 2030.

    Before INFINITE, there had been gamers and normies. But after INFINITE, there were only try-hards and casuals, with the formers becoming celebrities! It became the first chance to rise up the social ladder for many, ever since they lost their jobs to U-bots.
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    MMORPG: Rise of the Peerless Pumpkinmancer
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Replied to Jynxieee

    How did he prove you wrong? As far as I can tell from your perspective there is no cost, no hidden drawbacks. The saying is based on the premise that if something is free you are going to pay in another way. But YOU are not going to pay the costs, others are. If I give a hundred bucks to a beggar, he is getting something without remunition, aka. free. It costs me money, but he is getting it for free.

    There was no such thing as a free lunch.
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    Host, Please Be Honest! What Exactly Are You?
    Horror · lumydee
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Commented

    So this kind of absolute statement is disproven once you find an example of the opposite. So how much do you guys pay for oxygen? Its free in my country. I believe it is free everywhere, with no hidden costs built into our economy.

    There was no such thing as a free lunch.
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    Host, Please Be Honest! What Exactly Are You?
    Horror · lumydee
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Replied to Dactarik

    Not really. Ves randomly decided to throw away his ideals because it was convenient for the author. This story is getting more and more boring and predictable. If there is an edgy choice, the story always goes with that.

    Ch 703 Acolyte Gien
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • dragon723
    dragon7232yr
    Replied to 2risky

    Those people were always psychos. People don't just drop their mores, this is the author twisting Ves's character for the sole purpose of edginess.

    Ch 703 Acolyte Gien
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    The Mech Touch
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  • dragon723
    dragon7233yr
    Commented

    Good for you. Assuming a grade 7 monsters has upkeep proportional to its power, ut could easily serve as a way to control. Want to feed your monster that grade 6 meat it needs to live? Well here's the list of shit we need you to do for today, there'll be another the day after and the day after that.

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    Monster Integration
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  • dragon723
    dragon7233yr
    Replied to Plot_Armor

    Small-town doctors are often tied to a private practice. Meaning buildings, an office at least, and possibly expensive machines to help people/ monsters. In addition to losing their house, vehicles and everything else they owned. Only thing they would still have had is the various debts and a far from sufficient government payout.

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    Monster Integration
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  • dragon723
    dragon7233yr
    Commented

    So there was established safety bunkers, meaning monster horde attacks must be fairly common. No wonder the insurance companies won't cover for that, the risk is too high to be part of the normal insurance deal. You'd probably need a seperate insurance just for monster attacks.

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    Monster Integration
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