Kikasharn
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this need reworked
hmm seem cheap for regen passive.
should have put 3.7 million
says invincible sure its meant as invisible
that's a big baby! wonder if this is a mistype?
yeas he did he mentioned 6 being +5 but there is seven 15s total
it cuts off in the middle of the sentence a bunch of what?
I think this is a saying not sure "I did something bad to you yet you still help me" that's what I'm guessing the author meant
fear, despair, and horror would be better here
author should have just said the system suppressed his emotion over his death rather than say he has no emotions at this point.
basically same description of a cultivator lol
only thing different from the other sign in novels i read so far
honestly at this point it shows you lack interest for the story to just do these small tiny bits for a chapter im not gonna continue this story any more when even the author is showing he doesn't care
you mentioned blake as black multiple times
similar to a saiyin?
umm i just wasted coins for this
logical in this situation especially because of people characters not sure when a person you help quickly turns around when the situation is reversed. help yourself before others
author could put parentheses after what is said regularly so those who have trouble can understand extra work but no controversies