jrhightech

This novel is junk food, it's an interesting enough read to sate you and that's about it. Because this novel was translated I won't get into the grammar other than to say it does improve in the later chapters, but it's still that classic mtl we all know and love. The story has a lot of interesting plot lines that just get thrown in and forgotten until the author finishes writing foot fetish smut and remembers the story needs to progress. This wouldn't be an issue other than the fact that this is a HP fic which, by definition, will have all the characters under age, which just makes the whole thing way worse. I finished the novel due to sunk cost and honestly it was extremely sad to watch the quality of it rapidly drop as the novel neared its end. A novel that wasted its potential in every way that mattered, and would make Chekov roll in his grave. But hey, at least no harem.