How much do you have?

Whoops, got a typo there, hehe

I will, and plan, on continuing this book. In the first place, this book is my guilty pleasure to create. I will not abandon it, nor will I scrap it. I just got a job lately and didn't have the time to update stuff. I will update it in the near future though, please wait for it! (^ ω ^)

Since I am still on my contract job, I don't really have that much time to write. I will try to update stuff though.

it's a term I heard somewhere from a UFC youtuber, it means the vertical line of attack.

Shawn will be mad af

That's what I'm going for

Dang, the amount of anxiety I got, knowing this was a tragedy.

Cmon girl, be strong!!! You gonna need it in the coming days, trust me on this one Σ(▼□▼メ)

Kinda hard tbh

(＠＾◡＾)

made me remember about a work where the MC was given money and chose to buy bread out of all things he could buy; It all went stale after 3 days, bruh moment

idk (￣ω￣) hehe

Exquisite world background, with expanding history and stories. Plot development and the character design are quite novel, bringing you a mercantile-type story, with quite a lot of action going on. Updating stability is still on the low side (since I've read the author's work on another site), but it's an overall great work.

The writing quality is good to some degree with small grammatical errors, albeit won't be quite as noticeable as you integrate yourself with the story. Now, the story itself is full of drama, intrigue, and tragedy, of which I'm not a big fan, but I'll try to review it as objectively as possible. ====Little spoiler ahead==== . . . . . . . . We follow a girl named Deyan, an assassin who set out on killing an important person because of X reasons (again, I'll try to keep it as spoiler free as possible). She got helped by an insider, and see the horrors of war there, etc. etc. These characters are crafted beautifully and they had some charm to them, but sadly they're held back by the world background that doesn't really explain anything apart from a place called Benma that's at war. It was as if we were watching a war film without any background information, just characters interacting with each other. I'm not saying it's bad, but it certainly leaves me with somewhat mixed feelings. At one point I feel the interactions are good as is, but I also felt it could be much better.

Thank you for the review

Exquisite world background, with expanding history and stories. Plot development and the character design are quite novel, bringing you a mercantile-type story, with quite a lot of action going on. Updating stability is still on the low side (since I've read the author's work on another site), but it's an overall great work.

The writing quality is superb, and the story development was really on point. The characters are very interesting. Although the world and premise were quite full of cliches, it's still a good work. Very recommended to new readers out there.

Kek alien

Historical fantasy with expanding world background, although not my cup of tea, I could see the care put into crafting those words. I can't really rate it objectively since I'm not used to reading historical fictions, but I could suggest the introduction of character first before the world (it would be better if it's in the same first chapter) so that the reader had someone/something to connect to.