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NightHunter

NightHunter

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2017-11-23 JoinedPhilippines
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter1mth
    Commented

    no demand? bruh.

    A/N: Yes, this still isn't dead yet. Shocking, I know. Due to the lack of demand, I may write this less frequently than NGJ but I still feel a duty to write it and at least finish the bloodborne portion so you can at least be assured of that.
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    A Soulsborne's Traveler System
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter1mth
    Replied to Cenauge

    You're overestimating the difference in the looks of a "pumped" vs "casual" definition of muscles, unless guy goes for a certain body fat percentage it's hard to looked ripped when muscles aren't pumped. TL:DR is he probably doesn't look that different.

    In his view, Milton was just growing taller, and he couldn't recognize the specifics of his son's physical fitness.
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    The Wizard Path From The Simulator
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter3mth
    Commented

    WHO LET THIS AUTHOR COOK?!

    Ch 28 Chapter 18. Origins of Disaster
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Red Priest Pathway
    Anime & Comics · Vandalizer
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter5mth
    Replied to NightHunter

    Here I am structuring my comment and webnovel just fucks it up like that. thanks cloudary very cool. and yet here you are making these shitty UI changes no one asked for when you haven't even fixed the basic issues.

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    Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter5mth
    Posted

    Honest review, I'm at 170 and I will drop my thoughts on this novel right now.First, writing quality. It's relatively decent, it't not as horrible as some other MTLs there, mistakes here and there but it's tolerable. 4/5.Story Development, it actually had an interesting start and concept however I just cannot stomach the fact that the MC seems to be a bit too brainless for my tastes. The MC is a legitimate Wish-Fulfillment fantasy character which I have no problem with, it's just that we have gotten to a point in the novel where the system rewards the MC for specific degenerative choices and the MC cannot think for himself and auto just follows his lower head. Just to add, by 170 there is 5 women and the Main "Wife" is like a placeholder. It's written like the MC doesn't function normally and has 0 guilt at all and just "pushed everything to the back of his mind" before he once again gets fucking laid with the next woman who "gets a weird feeling in her chest" every time. 1/5Character Design, The women are actually great in this Novel, we are shown relatively unique characters with their own quirks hobbies and even the side characters are memorable, there's not a lot of the Young Master trope that goes around although it's still used as an oppurtunity for the MC to earn brownie points with his next victim.Have I said that the MC in this novel is shallow? He is, in the novel he is portrayed as the mysterious, kind, and always smiling gentleman. But the truth in my eyes is that he just cannot form his own values, opinions, and integrity. 3/5. solely for the good work for the women's characteristicsUpdating Stability, it's an official novel, what else can I say? Unless dropped it would always stay as 5/5 and I probably won't even come back to this novel to change it if it ever does get dropped.World Background, Although we're narrowed down into like 2 cities so far, it seems that it is pretty expansive and central. Unlike in other novels where the MC starts in a backwater/rural place here the MC starts off with a relatively high level spawn seeing as there is the existence of the Li Lu or whatever family that is the 2nd Wife's relative. so 3/5 story doesn't feel like it is narrowed down by the area but it really doesn't show much world development either because the MC is either fucking or getting fucked in the literal sense in every other chapter. Overall rating, I love the premise, I've seen another novel way back and the MC radiated GROWTH like no other there, until that one got dropped which I am still sad about. anyways I came here expecting some of that, which I got very little off because other than the sudden personality shift at the beginning he's just been a paper doll since. Hence my rant here in the reviews. That's all thanks for reading.

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    Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter5mth
    Commented

    Try Perplexity.Ai it's good as well

    I'm not going to say this is the Dossier I will use for Rias later on guys, but I was half making these things with ChatGPT and just wanted to show you what it could put out for someone. I think it's pretty damn good.
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    The Counselor - A Group Chat Story
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter5mth
    Replied to NightHunter

    Felt like I had to point that out. It's here as well you should read it. Way better than the Manga Adaptation

    Xu Wenping came from Earth, and it had been ten years since he had transmigrated to this world called Blue Star.
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    Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter5mth
    Replied to Black9_FOXY

    You know TLM was a novel right?

    Xu Wenping came from Earth, and it had been ten years since he had transmigrated to this world called Blue Star.
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    Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter5mth
    Commented

    Mmm, Honestly the writing in this is kinda good already, I am bothered by the lack of dialogue though, but I guess if you were focused on not nutting it kinda makes sense?

    A/N: How do you like this piece of fine erotic literature? Did you enjoy this R18 chapter? Would you say it is better than the last one? Any and all input is welcome!
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    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter8mth
    Replied to NightHunter

    Tl;dr these past couple of chapters is basically forcing our MC to go through Dimensional Jetlag as he is forcefully transferred to Anime time and conceptual progression. Basically it's Anime in VR and it's somewhat interactive and if you act out of line you damage your real life soul or something

    Ch 184 Discounted Reality.
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    Annihilation Maker DXD
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter8mth
    Commented

    I can't see anything +1

    For the people that had read the previous chapters before, can you check if there is content inside the <> please? Eg: <Test>
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    DxD: The Plunder System
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter9mth
    Commented
    "This room is were all in depth therapy sessions will take place, as well as any requests."
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    The Counselor - A Group Chat Story
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter9mth
    Commented

    Truffles are actually nutritious.

    "White truffles are the best! They're better than anything else! Australian lobster and Kobe beef are subpar trash when compared to white truffles!"
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    Top Student: Experience Infinite Occupations
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter9mth
    Commented

    Fresh bag of E Coli

    There was also a bag of dried bacteria.
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    Top Student: Experience Infinite Occupations
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter9mth
    Replied to Master4thWall

    I want the same power where my coat's pocket goes into my pants as well Neji looking dripped out as always

    [Image Here]
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    The Cursed Gamer
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter9mth
    Commented

    Mad sus.

    My Dad Will Definitely Tear Me Up!_1
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    Contracted The Beautiful Triplets And I Gained The 10000x Rebate System
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter9mth
    Replied to Ben_Payne

    pixiv. the holy land of anime art.

    3 times he said, eh. I only have 1 chance. But Aizawa is right about one thing, I can't miss this event. I have a Hero in mind who I want to fight beside me against the Gods, and if I want to attract her attention, I will need to poke her out of the rabbit hole. This is the greatest chance I would get for that.
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    The Cursed Gamer
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter10mth
    Replied to Karma_Lord

    tldr of the convo beneath: You're right. unfortunately my dig is bicker

    Looking at the figure in front of me, I didn't know if I should address him/her as a male or female. The figure was beyond handsome and beautiful that I was lost in its appearance for some time.
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    Naruto: Back in Ancient Times
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter10mth
    Commented

    Saving for mommy Kafka I have like 100 pulls saved 😊

    On non-story-related things, I got a silver wolf! Hope you all were lucky with your rolls to get the Bronie gamer girl!
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    Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers
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  • NightHunter
    NightHunter11mth
    Commented

    I'm just lowkey disappointed with the interaction between MC and Lorelei, While true she got shocked by the First Magic, it still doesn't deny her Controlling Aspect on the MC which I don't really appreciate, I hooe it gets better from here. I honestly thought it would be different once he'd finish moving houses and get some kind of development, but this dynamic is still here even when he's interacted with gods already.

    Ch 60 Most Valuable Information
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    Multiversal: The Shop
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