a_commoner
I like zombies, not in that way! ahem! anyway, RPG like worlds with game elements, and of course cultivation without stupid characters carried by luck.
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a_commoner4mthPosted- a_commoner9mthReplied to Adrion_Lord
Well, every rich person is just one person!
Many were starving in the downtown of Lubumbashi while the rich stuffed themselves with delicacies. However, he was not depressed since he had come to understand the ways of society. - a_commoner11mthPosted
It's a pain to read with all the info dumping, but you can overlook that with skimming skills, the real problem aside from the slow pace and the story getting a little bit boring because of that, it's the translation. It's just switched like that to MTL shamelessly after the pay wall. I don't get the logic behind that. Shouldn't the premium chapters be even more quality!
- a_commoner11mthReplied to tedmosby2016
This list is not necessary my top 5 since it's really hard to remember make such a list after reading so much but these are a few novels that I remember I enjoyed: True Martial World Worlds’ Apocalypse Online Rebirth of the Evil Mother-In-Law The Devil’s Cage Transmigrated into the Cannon Fodder’s Daughter Carefree Path of Dreams Don't forget to share some good ones, little bast*rd!
"Old man, are you idiot? How can you spend decades of practice but not have any results?" Leon insulted him. How can someone spend decades and not even become a Tier 1 Alchemy Adept? How lacking is the development of the alchemy profession of this world!? - a_commoner11mthReplied to Mubarek_Jibril
Some average reader: hey average reader, why do you feel the need to comment your thoughts in a comment section.
This paragraph has been deleted. - a_commoner1yrReplied to Kalman
He's the MC, he's gonna make a lot eventually!
Many were starving in the downtown of Lubumbashi while the rich stuffed themselves with delicacies. However, he was not depressed since he had come to understand the ways of society. - a_commoner1yrCommented
And why the murderous grin for, wasn't he just asking to be killed!
"Hoh? And how do you plan to do that?" Kaze asked with a murderous grin. - a_commoner1yrCommented
So he would literally do the same thing and get bored again after he became the strongest. I know writing is overwhelming, but come on, buddy, you can't make such a ridiculous mistakes at the first chapter of the story. And if it's about a couple of girl he can't get over when he has a Harem, it would be even more lame.
"I'd enjoy my power." Kaze replied with a slight smile, "I haven't enjoyed myself in four millennia. I'm so bored that I'm praying you came here to kill me." - a_commoner1yrCommented
He seems to feel suffocated but nothing else, huh, but why the f**k would he be curious about how it feels when he feels nothing, he know he can't relate anyway, and so it shouldn't be in his personality to be curious about how things feels at his age, and a rational person shouldn't be curious about such bs in his situation. And the girl too, like all this BS happening and her situation and she's acting like she was just listening to some music and the MC surprised her. Simply put, this chapter is very ridiculous and I don't feel like reading more.
Ch 2 Changes - a_commoner1yrPosted
Aside from people noticing buying it's way to fame, there's nothing special about this story other than a promising start. It rapidly fell flat with a lot of bs, a rich guy pretending to be a homeless, the hardened vengeful MC having his heart flutter because of a young girl, and this rich girl hating the MC for stealing her food in the kindergarten to the point of following him to a poor man school, then suddenly felling in love with him for apologizing. The system missions are ridiculously easy, and finally the author keep bulking his already short chapters with the same system information again and again.
- a_commoner1yrReplied to warizela
Now that I think about it, there's cases where your argument fail, I think. When letting someone do good against your own interests is, in my opinion, very good, and by the same token, if stopping evil won't hurt your own interests, and you let it happen, then it's very evil. I guess, our intuition isn't there for nothing.
This paragraph has been deleted. - a_commoner1yrReplied to Rhys_sdw
People complain because it doesn't make sense for a lot of people based on their lived experience, and that usually break emersion and the trust in the author to make a realistic story.
This paragraph has been deleted. - a_commoner1yrReplied to ExZyond
That was uncalled for, huh! Yeah, I don't like dense MCs either, LOL!
This chapter has been deleted. - a_commoner1yrCommented
How does she know he's the same person?
She inhaled deeply to calm down. Her eyes flashed coldly as she murmured to herself, "Now that I've been reborn, I'll deal with this lifetime's troubles so that Senior Brother can lead a carefree life…"detail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The StartEastern · Li Baijin - a_commoner1yrCommented
Not a hidden danger, it's extermination.
After having plundered so much luck this time, it could be seen that the other party was definitely someone who had strong luck. His strength was definitely not weak either. To be able to generate that luck-plundering black light, he had to be at least a Great Archmage. Norton wondered if the other party had suffered a backfire from the gold-tier Ancestral Protection and was killed. If he was not dead, then a hidden danger would remain. - a_commoner1yrCommented
Yup, follow the beauty smiling to your grave.
"Phew... Indeed, a sister who can trigger an option with an Earth Grade Middle Tier reward is really terrifying," he said. - a_commoner1yrCommented
The most dangerous zombies, Simps.
The commotion of the fight just now had already attracted a group of disciples of the Order of Blue Heart and they gathered around. Hearing Liu Zijin's pleasant voice sound as if she had been wronged, they felt a significant increase of chivalry in their hearts, and all gathered towards Jiang Beiran, their eyes full of anger.