

Writing
of reading
47
Read books
girl...
I will.
Okay, familiar storyline going on here. But it's still engaging enough. Some paragraphs are too long, tasking on the eyes. I see what you're doing with numbers🙃. Zero, Nineteen, Millions.... okay. I think the book has great potential though.
Nice work you have going on here👍🏼. But there are some word placements that seem a bit awkward. Light editing should fix all that. Like the concept though.
Isn't that a bit too much?😠😤
You're dead. Franko😂
Heart racing, blood pumping. What a great writing 🖊️. I don't have a lot to say but your grasp of emotions is insane😎. I can only say GOOD JOB.
🫣🫣
You missed the ending quote
🥺🥺