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Yeah, you pretty much got it man. Normally a Veyr passes through the Passage untouched, while a Riven survives after being scarred by something inside it. That’s exactly why Sio’s situation is so abnormal, something managed to reach him in a way it really shouldn’t have.

Really enjoyed the book, man. I just wish there were more chapters already 😄 Keep going with it, you’ve got something good here.

Thanks for reading, I hope you keep reading further too. And thank you again for the Golden Ticket, you actually gave me my first one, so I really appreciate you. I wont forget the support.

Thanks, for reading I hope you read it further too. Once again thank you.

Thanks, for reading I hope you read it further too. Once again thank you.

Thanks, for reading I hope you read it further too. Once again thank you.

Pretty interesting start. I liked the creepy atmosphere, especially the red sky and grin stuff, and the system feels mysterious enough to keep me curious. It’s only five chapters so far, but honestly I think it’s worth checking out.