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Very good story, the writer is really brilliant. perfect characters with names also definitely perfect.
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Momin’s journey from “why just study theory?” to building a baby-like AI feels relatable. The brother-artist + brother-engineer team up is a nice touch. Family support adds warmth.[img=Heart eyes][img=update] Feels like a passionate first-draft of a sci-fi adventure written by someone who genuinely loves AI + robots. It has that “what if I built Sophia 2.0 in my room” energy. If you lean into the emotional bond between Momin & Sofia + slow down her evolution, this could be a killer short novel or web-series script.
Thanks Bro.