Dyah_Aristya

i think this sidestory about Sely should be told as flashback when Golda and Sely finally met.

To be honest, I don’t read many fantasy books since I mostly read fantasy manga. Overall, the story is quite interesting. However, up until Chapter 2, I still don’t feel attached to the main character. I also think the MC seems a bit too mature for his current age. Some of the words are a little difficult for me to understand since English is not my first language, so I personally prefer simpler wording. But I’m still only on Chapter 2 and haven’t finished it yet. I hope the story gets even better as it goes on.