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Curiosity won…it always does. So…I checked.

Plural on lights means strikeout the (a) before dying fireflies.

Overall I struggled with comprehension on this novel. Translating from Chinese to English or Korean to English something was lost. Pronouns for gender roles use of I when they meant me or my, him or her. Also the difference in school for middle school it’s to the 8th grade where I live. High school is from 9th to 12th. So I believe this setting is for a high school but as to whether it’s private or public, I don’t understand which way this setting aiming for. Slang for the acting industry also was lost on me. The different spelling for names Cho from Jo, Ee for I, Jueng for Jung… so I eventually made it to the end but I don’t think I’ll be back.

“ I guess so, sighs Ji-ho…but I’ll…”

…I had (returned) just…

“Yeah?” He felt like he was extraordinary from the moment he woke up. “ha-ha, that’s the first time…

Do-Jae pointed at himself…

Said Ji-ho…

Okay you refer a lot to the sky and heaven is it because this high school is funded largely by the Presbyterian church? If so it would help greatly if you mentioned this in the first chapter for those of us that don’t know this…

than I (remembered)…