Us3l3ss

First review ever. First of all i really like this story. It has a beautiful world and i really like that its not following the og plot but still incorporates the stuff like the thief at the end... I like the Mystery you built up with the Chess Organisation. The writing in my opinion is quite well done, sure there are some inconsistencies espescially with the names (not bad but sometimes the owl changes name and in one chapter The MC suddenly is called Ren). My biggest problem and thats not really that bad is character interaction, when its done its done good but sometimes it feels more like "Uh ah forgot he should interact with someone" Maybe that is only a personal Preference tho. Same can be said about the system, sometimes it suddenly appears and is awesome some times it feels like author forgot about it entirley. i dont mean it should be there every day and spamming him with op powers just maybe some more consistency. i dunno. I can´t say much about update stability since i just finished but i saw it was last updated a month ago. hope that changes soon. Anyway thanks for this story i hope it continues and i love the concept of talking and bonding with the animals xD