voslieyr

how come no one commented it yet!!!

im become engaged with your story

I really like your plot and characters, they’re very interesting and have a lot of potential. The flow is quite good and easy to follow. There are some small grammar mistakes, but it’s still understandable and can definitely be improved over time. I especially love how you build the atmosphere switching from serious moments to comedy, and then adding mystery. It makes the story more engaging. Overall, I really enjoy your story! I give you 5 because, i believe your writting will improve!! even your english not very good as other author but your gold is your plot!! keep it upp

REVEALLLLL TIMEE 😍

i have a feeling

OH NOO RUNN

this chptr make me emotional 🥺🥺

he tsundere HAHAAAHAH