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im become engaged with your story
I really like your plot and characters, they’re very interesting and have a lot of potential. The flow is quite good and easy to follow. There are some small grammar mistakes, but it’s still understandable and can definitely be improved over time. I especially love how you build the atmosphere switching from serious moments to comedy, and then adding mystery. It makes the story more engaging. Overall, I really enjoy your story! I give you 5 because, i believe your writting will improve!! even your english not very good as other author but your gold is your plot!! keep it upp
REVEALLLLL TIMEE 😍
i have a feeling
OH NOO RUNN
this chptr make me emotional 🥺🥺