Mike897

I’d prefer it if the characters stayed true to their original personalities. I mean, most of them feel a bit out of character. If there’s one thing you did well, it’s giving Sukuna a distinct personality, and your writing is quite good. But everything else, such as CharDev, is…pretty bad. At least for me, it’s just not engaging anymore. But if this is the style you want to write in and you don’t really care what others think, then just go for it and don’t take this feedback too seriously.