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Want face slapping to those editor, writer, and professor. If you write those event to let reader have negative feeling. It also obligated to erease those feelings from reader.

Still irritation like old version. I mean there no punishment or redemptions for those damm scientist. Only bad taste remains. At least IMO you should let damm father remain to explosion whit MC.

To become strongest MC can't cheat? What a stupid logic. Aren't elf king become strongest through cheat in the first place.

Can someone recomment fanfic(or original novel that story are in japan) that have good romance as this one? This novel ten time better than those harem fanfic that collects heroin like pokemon. I don't hate harem, but over 90% of harem novel has shallow romance.

Two sister bla bla bla How in original world bla bla bla And another chapter waste just like this. Lately they're a lot of repeatly filter that make me bore and tired to follow this novel every day. After some face slapping end I will drop this novel for a while and comeback when there a lot of chapter so i can read in one go.

Oh! I notice you are a same guy. Is this novel a rewrite?

In Silver Spoon arc. The story have summery a bit so reader can understand what happens in that Silver Spoon chapter. But in FMA arc it a bit rush. I can't remember what happens in fifth laboratory. And what cost they talking about in FMA chapter 10. Author don't write enough summery so reader can sympathy like in Silver Spoon arc

I give up. The name between Shion and Satoru has randomly mistake. It hard to tell which one author original to refer. And most of review give this frustrating novel 5 star. Heh~

Chapter 82-83 content have been swap

Luffy not meet nami in shell town. But this is the second time that said she has been there. Is this novel AI generated?