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If you ever drop this shiz ama find you and touch you gang.jdndjdjdjfkmsnjcjfrnsnjxnnrkzigktndnfnfrndejejsjjdjfekdjvjfbrahhhhhbhhhhhhhznznsnsjxnfndndh

Hmm. I don't think his name is, Demiurge Ohara. So I guess not?

Np my nga

Huh nga u can't be serious, he wrote this chapter because a reader suggested actual real life techniques to be thought I mean I liked it, and also the authors not doing it to write some normal meh fanfic he's doing it to write better for his future books like actual books yk he's trying to get better if u want a shitty fanfic go fac off and read ching Chang novel 24 somewhere else I'll stick with this gem you bum.

I read up to the recent chapter and you can tell the author just gets better and better it's not stagnant and the fact that you can read his comments about criticism and him taking it well and even thanking the people for it just shows that this story has real potential. But only if he keeps it up. Good on you.

Just caught up to the recent chapter and honestly you smashed it, it was far better then any of your previous chapter keep going twin 🔥