Shrija_Mukherjee

1)The story is engaging and exciting. 😁 2)The character design is top notch along with the increase in it's depth with each passing chapters!🙌 3) The story doesn't solely revolve around the main lead- keifer and Jay but also the other characters play a huge role,and thus in the show the the actors are going to get much screen timing giving them exposure. 🤞 4)The way of story telling is gd too,the 'pov's". 🍁 5)Since,AMNSE is getting global praisals-so i think it would be nice if the story has some mentions of the outside countries apart from england,japan,Korea (like India,turkey,Saudi Arabia...) *In harry potter,they're were mentions of various facts or characters of other origins,so it would attract more readers/viewers.🌸🌼 6)Although,i gave 5stars to ur riting quality but in some cases i found some gender prblm n pronouns(human mistake,it's okay)🕯️ That's it-thank uh very much dear~!💞

Heyy Butterfly... Thanks for the wonderful translations,u did! I really enjoyed reading this... Thank You from the core of my heart~ Love from India...

aww...text each other all time!!...umm

It was really wrong of Angelo to scold jay in front of all the clsmates and teacher!...but,jay was at fault too...she go scoled by angelo a lot more times,in home,when no other person was watching...jay still didnt improove herself...angelo eve n arranged classes for her,and also her clsmates-she was still messing and not paying attention....she dint try much to stay focused... and being gurdian,angelo was suppossed to be angry and also he's a bit hot-headed so this happened... hope jay would study hard now

i misread 'gingerbread' as 'gingerhead'..and quickly remembered the red haired weasely family in hary potter...

If someone studies-Psychology..he/she becomes a psychologist,gives therapy sessions. If someone studies MBBS and does MD in it thn bcomes psychiatrist. Psychiatrists are doctor, psychologist aren't.

gawd...i mistyped itttt....

Thought abt kprkab,a hindi tv serial....🥹🎀💞

Like mother,like daughter

haha..jay nd her srcsm