callmenoir

I've read a fair share of villain genre, mainly the Chinese one. To be specific the so called "luck plunder" genre. Your novel seems have potential. MC character is truly a villain. But I also like one goodness trait in evil. example like Gu Changge evil but loves all of his woman and family. and your MC also seems caring to people loyal to him so it's good. My main critic to your novel is don't make the original MC can defeat your MC in the same realm. The main interest in this genre is usually "humiliating the OG protagonist and steal his opportunity". So my advice don't make your MC have a hard battle if it's in the same realm. worse if the OG protag has lower realm than your MC, and the result is a hard struggling battle it will lose the charm of villain genre. good luck!

I've read a fair share of villain genre, mainly the Chinese one. To be specific the so called "luck plunder" genre. Your novel seems have potential. MC character is truly a villain. But I also like one goodness trait in evil. example like Gu Changge evil but loves all of his woman and family. and your MC also seems caring to people loyal to him so it's good. My main critic to your novel is don't make the original MC can defeat your MC in the same realm. The main interest in this genre is usually "humiliating the OG protagonist and steal his opportunity". So my advice don't make your MC have a hard battle if it's in the same realm. worse if the OG protag has lower realm than your MC, and the result is a hard struggling battle it will lose the charm of villain genre. good luck!

Alice used to be my favorite[img=Lying], now her cute side gone and only the cold side remains.

Emily best girl, with Prof and Celia follow behind. Alice keep falling from bestgirl candidate (her personality gone and seems cold)

sigh, why ruin your novel with this bratty character. I hope he will not be a major character. if it's still in child body maybe im understand, but a manchild and his affection toward MC woman?Dissapointed.

don't trust no Yuri tag, the previous novel of this author has a yuri

thanks for coment that warning me there is a clone. sigh disgusting.

are all the woman have previous relationship or some of them still pure?

the power is okay , but the problem is you butcher his earlier attitude.

and all the talk about his family power is all bark no bite. so plis remove that overpowered tag if your main character bow to the people that have the same age as him