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We never got to see the heroine claiming scene of Alaric claiming Princess Hai Lan or Mu Qing like what just happened with Gu Ling. The only thing shown was him teasing them and doing nothing more which is strange because they are supposed to be important heroines in his Alaric conquests.
I mean Vanessa should be described as being in her "early twenties" instead of "Mid-twenties" in the last paragraph of chapter 774 and the beginning chapter of 775.
" young man barely in his early twenties" isn't Kraven body still just supposed to be 18 years old since his exile was just for a few months before his supposed "return"? It reminds me a few chapters ago when you have Vanessa appearing before her father with her maids as being described as being in her "mid-twenties" despite, the fact she two years older then Kraven based on chapter 672. So she fits the description more of being" barely in her mid-twenties" more then Kraven who yet to meet that age. Although, Kraven age does make me wonder why did Julian describe him as " perhaps thirty years of age," when meeting him in chapter 663 when he is obviously young.
Also, I wonder when the Duke and the others are going to point out Olivia looking younger then before and being stronger. It should've been mentioned after Kraven(Julian) did the first Mana Reversal with her. Especially, when Sera was said to have been given orders by Olivia to serve him some soup that she made to help him with his health at the time.She and the maids that were there should of had noticed Olivia changes. Also, the people who would see her in the hallways should of had noticed along with the Duke,Vanessa, Liam, and Louisa by now.
Thanks for the chapters.
Hope you get better soon. Thanks for the chapter.
Yeah I just reread the chapters again after this post to make sure if Li Feng ever had a transition scene when he decided to upgrade his Alchemist Rank 1 to Alchemist Rank 2 and he never had one. It's just randomly mentioned in this chapter that he is Rank 2 Alchemist now. You may have to add a scene in one of the earlier chapters of him doing that. Since the latter chapters after this one just assume he always was Rank 2 and the earlier chapters such as chapter 5 and chapter 31 that bring up him possibly wanting to be Rank 2 Alchemist has him deny the idea for sake of him having a low profile for now. So he always remained an Rank 1 Alchemist until this chapter.
I wonder if Kraven(Julian) breaking through to Grand Mage. Thanks for the chapters.
"With his Rank 2 alchemist skills" I think you meant Rank 1. Rereading the chapters before this one Li Feng never upgraded his Alchemist skill to Rank 2, although in chapter 31 in regards to taking the Alchemist Guild test he thought about it, but dismissed wanting to stand out.
I hope Li Feng recalls the fact that in Yue Lan alternative future that he had two Divine Authoritys that he is used against "Yue Lan". One was "Gold" and the other that brought her to her death and was described as being dark "Sever". He should of had been wondered what sort of connection he had to that Divine Core that it appears currently before him. I wonder does it have a female form like Goldie.