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Ashborn555

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  • Ashborn555
    Ashborn55522d ago
    Replied to You_are_gay

    حتى اذا اصبح بالغ سوف يبقى غبي او لماذا لم يختار فاكهه الدماغ واختار فاكهه الرعد اول دماغك وبعدين طور قوتك

  • Ashborn555
    Ashborn55522d ago
    Replied to TheHornyGambler

    If you're angry, what does that have to do with me? Go be angry somewhere else.

  • Ashborn555
    Ashborn55522d ago
    Replied to TheHornyGambler

    The enjoyment of the events makes up for the translation.

  • Ashborn555
    Ashborn5552 months ago
    Posted

    "This is the best novel I've read so far. There is no harem and no romance. The ideas are diverse, and the author is open-minded and listens to the readers' feedback. Even though the story is limited to only two worlds and hasn't expanded to others yet, the author has delved into them so deeply and explored their potential so well that it's much more enjoyable than many novels that hop between ten different worlds without any real attachment or fun. The author always comes up with innovative ideas and knows how to keep the excitement alive. I give it a full rating, and I’m willing to overlook a few mistakes like repeated chapters because they don't compare to the quality of the rest of the work. I’ve reached chapter 172, and I really hope the story maintains this level in the upcoming chapters."

  • Ashborn555
    Ashborn5552 months ago
    Posted

    Let's begin with the evaluation. Firstly, the protagonist's character initially appealed to me; his vengeful nature and willingness to endure anything to survive were appealing. However, towards the end, he began bearing burdens that weren't his own. If he hadn't killed that villain, if that villain had killed other people, he would have survived.The hero feels guilty for not killing the villain, and he has become burdened with more responsibility than he can handle. He has also become extreme in maintaining order, even if the humans in front of him are demons in human form.That's why I started to hate the novel in the later chapters. I've reached chapter 94. And then we talk about the system's rewards. The system was good at first; it gave good rewards, but then the rewards decreased. Even the protagonist, the first time, was looking for a way to fix the corrupt world, but now he's only looking for a way to... Maintaining the current system and replacing those old leaders—why didn't the writer consider giving the protagonist abilities that would allow him to diminish the powers of others, and have the protagonist establish his own organization, starting small-scale experiments to transform humans? Ordinary people to those who use cursed energy And so that it doesn't escape his control, for example, if he turns criminals into a desert, they might transform into people who use their power for nefarious purposes. Therefore, the power that gives him the ability to stop the power of others must also be the power he can take away. Among them are abilities like Yhwach's from Bleach That's all I think. I'll wait until there are 100 chapters, and if the protagonist's character doesn't change and remains stuck in the same twisted, bigoted, and extremist mindset, I'll drop it.Oh, and I forgot something else too. In the way he writes, when he's in a simulation, he writes from the third-person point of view or the reader's point of view, not from the protagonist's point of view. For example, in a simulation, you're simulating the protagonist's life; why go to that? Simulation gives us a second perspective, one that even the protagonist wasn't aware of or hadn't seen. For example, the protagonist might be talking to his friends, but then we're taken to the villain's side as he talks to his allies or followers. This technique breaks the imitation process and makes it no longer imitation at all. It's more like you're explaining a naturalistic narrative in a chapter, rather than a simulation.

  • Ashborn555
    Ashborn5552 months ago
    Commented

    I expected that before he said anything about the stitching.

  • Ashborn555
    Ashborn5552 months ago
    Commented

    The hero reminds me of myself when he said, "He never forgets a grudge."It's as if I see myself, but I can't. I praise the hero for his perseverance and endurance of that humiliation, even if it was in a simulation.

  • Ashborn555
    Ashborn5552 months ago
    Commented

    No, no, no, no, no, no, no, I expected that when the spiritual pressure disappeared, the hero had withdrawn it and made it invisible. But for the spiritual pressure to exceed that of many people, to the point that it reached a higher dimension, I didn't expect that.