HeavenWineIsAWord

Are you serious?

The storyline is quite interesting but it feels a bit too fast and here the main character shows some characteristics that are a bit unreasonable for the beginning of the story. However But This Story Has A Pretty Good And Interesting Concept And This Is Just A Suggestion, What If You Add Some Small Details That Are Strange But Piercing And May the Quality of Your Work Improve and Its Popularity Grow [img=Relaxed]