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    Yqyqyqyqy5 months ago
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    Love the story ,dropped it ,is a great story, but i have a problem, all the football stuff, its not because i dont like it, its because i feel every game is the same, wow Andrew breaking récords wow, andrew team winning wow i didn’t see that coming wow, i feel this story lacks in one thing, an antagonist, dont get me wrong, this story feels like a fairy tale and is fine, but even peter pan had Captain Hook, i Just think Andrew needs someone so he can improve, make him loss, make him feel human, i know that its basically his second life so He obviously has a huge advantage over the others, and that's what I feel makes this story feel somewhat empty.,because right now, it doesn't seem like anyone can face him, and it makes me feel like all the chapters are the same, but great story, keep doing it