
I am a blind 14-year-old Rider also have mercy please I love doing this and do not critique me too badly
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it depends is the link leading to your story on the web novel page or another website
either two possibilities one your writing of languages quite interesting one could say or two you need to fix this and this is a mistake
so this is a Chinese novel I'm joking by the way it just has way too many Chinese properties like way too many seen your brothers way too many cultivations and way too many realms and whatnot
is this a Chinese novel or a Korean novel cuz what's up with these senior brother this and Senior brother that what is this can you explain I'm like confused
you're way more civilized and better than us humans we do not hesitate to kill each other and they say that they would not kill each other unless it's extremely needed wow how Noble
yapping dreamer are you like me and you only do one but at a time or are you going to do multiple books at once if it's one book at a time then that's fine with me cuz I'm the same way
also yapping dreamer can you please check out a void drifter it's really good there might be a few mistakes here and there but hey we're all human
I want to be a big fan of your series I just started hopefully I can bend to this and also why haven't people commented this is the first chapter or last chapter of the first Arc come on guys
give me one righteous main character that does not say that can't good story by the way
not a bad chapter good job man