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I'm going to continue listening to this story but if it doesn't get edited to the right way then I'm done listening to it to me it's a good story arc and I like the vibe from it but when you say it's a twin brother and then switch it over to two twin sisters it don't make no f****** sense it's like doing a whole 360 here please change it for the love of Jesus and the part about continuing on the bloodline how is he supposed to continue on the bloodline if he doesn't have a freaking lower cuz it seems like he went from a he to a she I hate it when books do this they say the characters a guy at first then it switches over to a girl and then I'm like listening to what I said what the f*** just happened and I keep thinking that over and over again until I go freaking crazy it's like what am I listening to I thought the main character was supposed to be a guy next minute is a girl fix it for the love of Jesus I'm going to keep commenting on here until it's done the right way don't change something that don't need to be changed

I thought Yen was supposed to be a man not a girl cuz you kept saying he before now it's a her or she I thought yin yang was supposed to be a big brother and a twin sister this makes no sense please edit this mistake

sadly they didn't so I decided to download this app so I can find the novel as soon as I seen that there was FanFiction on here I said to myself I hope that it was there took me awhile but I found it I enjoy reading this story a lot🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

this book was very good I loved every minute of this series when I first found it on YouTube now I found it on this app on my phone and I'm listening to it all over from the beginning I put two power stones that I just got from this app to help it along because it is my favorite you did a very good job writing this fanfiction of Lord of the Rings Lord of the Rings was my favorite when I was growing up so thank you for showing the support of Lord of the Rings