Spark_of_Thought

The first 5 chapters are excellent, really no complaints. I especially like the interactions between the characters and how they react to the protagonist's actions. Just please don't turn this into a harem. I know there's no indication of that yet, but who knows? What saddens me is seeing that good stories, "the ones I like," have so few chapters; now all that's left is to wait for more chapters.

Well, here I am again, and honestly, the new artifact catalog system in chapter 35 really discouraged me from reading the story. Maybe someone liked the idea, but honestly, I don't know if it's because all the stories I've read with a "shop" system have disappointed me, since the authors always end up exaggerating the items in the shop. But it's still a good story, much better than most fanfics on the site.

A brief warning: this story is not for readers who enjoy fast-paced narratives and quick power gains. Well, in short, it's a good story, good enough to keep me interested for 25 chapters, which is the amount published up to this point in the review. I especially liked the plot development, which doesn't just focus on the main character, and other characters actually think intelligently. This made me feel more immersed in the story. I also liked the main character's personality; he's not the typical arrogant or nervous type. There are some strange words in the dialogues, but nothing that spoils the story. And honestly, unlike most superficial fanfics, this story really left me wanting to read more chapters. I sincerely hope the author doesn't give up on the story. And just so you know, this is just my opinion