saki_jayferrrlove

sooo good

author can u write one part of chap where section e nd her fam was all clinging to her nd rest three child were with kiefer he saw kevin was sitting all alone bcz he was missing his mom he was scared that everyone will steel his mom frm him during breakfast jay saw kevin was not eating when she went he started crying nd kevin never cries he started saying they will take u away nd he wants to go hom he doesnt wants to stay here nd he saw that man that day he understood they will take her awaywhich made all of them panic nd kiefer nd everyone was in guily bcz he was a child he didnt understand she was away for 4yrs nd they missed her he jnderstood tthey ar taking his mom than jay took him in room made him calm nd kiefer was one look away frm crying nd pamicking what if jay leaves something like that in ur own way plzzzzzzz author ❤️❤️

god authorr plzzzzzz next chp soon this was soo gppd

Its soo damn good the story spcially the plot omgg author in love with this book ur writing style is favvvv the plot twist nd turns 😭😭😭 plzz dnt stop this book even fr one day i absolutely love this book rn

god author whole day i wait fr this book omgggg i love this book i absolutely love this book nd this chp was sooo damn good the emotions tge wrting the english uffff plzzz upload tom soooon ok plzzzz dnt keep us waiting

author i gave on prev chap if u liked that u can make its completely upto ur wish ❤️

sooo goood

plzz onemore plzz

broo ur story is good too good yes endgame is jayfer i got it but as a honest fanfic reader i jst wanna say if it wasnt jayfer fanfic it is a mindblowing chpts but all the chp there is a jst a tiny glimps of kiefer nd section e like i have found this book today nd properly barely few chps has kiefer part and there is no kiefer pov so i will req u to write there part too even if they ar fighting or jay is angry kiefer crying in front of her anything bcz that will attract audience more trust me im not a writer i have no knowledge abt that but if u focus on other characters more nd jayfer part less than i feel audience gets littile sad rest is ur wish author it was jst my review if any of my words make u feel sad im soo soo sorry i didnt meant any word to hurt u trust me ❤️🫶

author dnt take my words wrong bcz i feel here they should get a very happy ending bcz few beutiful things when we exaggerate them it gets strechy this is the most bwitiful part u can give them a proper end rest is ur wish the book was too good it was very diff but i will always wait fr ur new book never stop writing ur wordplay is too good dnt stop it