LarryCashman

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The first chapter hooked. I'm expecting more from this, author.

Awesome one, author. I love the concept, but you might need to adjust your writing style. Your paragraphs are tool long and scary.😂

Wow! I'm glad to see this. Thanks for your honest opinion. Well, the reason I didn't stretch the backstory is because of the readers. I learnt not to bore readers with info dumps on the first three chapters. If you're looking forward to a contract, you should avoid it like a plague. Also, hoarding all of those info is what keeps readers rooted. They always want to know what led to this, how this happened, and all of those information when they get the juicy tea first. I've heard several feedbacks from Chief Editors about putting the backstory in the first chapters. It's ideal to span those stories across many chapters, instead of putting them all in one or two chapters. In truth, I'd love to do that. It's kinda my style, but I just have to follow the trend. Give the readers what they want. If it were a physical book, I'd write to my satisfaction. After all, it's an e-book... so I gotta put what will entice most readers to keep them hooked. Thanks again.

No. His armor, sword, and other weapons.

Nah. The Great Abyss Dragon—a black dragon.

Why? 😆 🤣

The Null Swordsman.

Yes.

I'll keep updating, guys. Rest assured.