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I am really grateful for your review, in response to your review, I will try to correct some of my mistakes, well, it's natural that I have many mistakes, This is my first novel so there are many mistakes, btw thank you for your honest review! I look forward to your next comment 😊😊
i'm sorry for that problem, it's because my bad grammar, but don't worry because the next chapter will not like this
Thank you for letting me know, I have made a new remake so that it can be understood, sorry if I have this mistake, this is because at that time my grammar was still bad
i'm sorry for my mistake, i already remake the chapter to more better
shameless author giving his own novel 5 stars. For anyone looking for harem novels, you've come to the right place, because this is the place. At the beginning, you might feel that the story is going too fast because I did it on purpose for the sake of the story's development. This story is inspired by the novel entitled "I Became the Villain the Hero Obsessed with" It may seem similar at first but I made this story different, including a darker and more pressing story. Many people said that the writing in the first chapter was very bad, so I'm sorry because at that time my English was very bad and now I have changed my writing style in the next chapter. Don't worry, there will be lots of plot twists here and it will surprise you. So if you have any questions, please let me know in the comments!
thank you so much for giving your opinion, and thanks for being honest, actually i need this opinion to make my novel better, thank youu ❤️❤️
Yes, the story was inspired by that novel at the beginning, but I’m developing a completely different direction, plot, and character growth later on. Hope you enjoy the coming chapters!
Yup, I got a bit of inspiration from that trope, but the story will go very differently later. The MC, the hero, and the whole plot take their own path in my version.
I usually start with the main plot in mind, but I let the characters’ personalities shape how each scene unfolds. Sometimes they act in ways I didn’t expect, and that actually makes the story more fun to write!
first of all, i also read solo leveling comic and it was a long time ago so i already forgot about the side characters besides sung jin woo, I didn't even think their names were the same, I thought of making Yoo Jinhoo the main character because the name just came to my mind, so that's how it was 😅