MysteriousCat

Yes. I forgot about that

Thank you for spotting this. Yeah, I decided not to involve Raze Dawg more because it'd prolong the battle and I think it's best to wrap this arc up and move on! I'll fix contradiction when I find time

We don't ask ladies how much they weight, do we? :D

Thank you for reading!

Glad to hear it :D If you have any idea for theme etc you can leave it over there! imma post some hot springs pics right now!

I wish I could have you as a beta reader haha :D

thank you for the comment and all likes on the patreon!

My mistake. Thank you for pointing it out!

Great points. If I may ask, how far have you read?

He learns those down the line! But I agree with you, there's a lot things that could have been better written, more clearly, etc. But I hope it didn't take away the fun reading my book. Thank you for all insight!