SkeEmperor

Well, after rereading, I found out that my comment about story flow is inaccurate and vague. I mean it just sometimes lacked some temporal transitions (for example: 2 days later,..) between each event and chapter. I don't know really well if these stuffs do suit for your work. Considering if you think it's appropriate.[img=Hmm]. And also thanks for reading and replying my long yapping above.

Great work! Great ideas. Hope to seeing the next chapter

Personal review: well, reading to chap 34 is sufficient for me to seek some problems: 1. The story flow is sometimes not consistent.(sometimes, when I turned to the next chapter, I wondered if I read the same story) 2. The combat scenes are quite dull, and short (there's literally no tactics or the propontagonist' improvements in fighting IQ, hand-to-hand technique or raw strength,through these fights. It's literally copying others' magic) Author, I think you should review the fanfic "megumi X arknights( the strongest sorcerer tommorow, I could insist this fanfic is on the top of these aspects, even though this story is quite underrated, somehow. 3. The love story is pretty rush, in my opinion, cuz I saw a few interactions between them(Henry and Luvigelita), at least let they become best friends or couple first. Boom, every stage is skipped directly to sleeping on the same bed :)))) (this stuff is humorous lol). =+ I think you should add more third pov or inner thoughts about the previous stuffs or main characters' action. End, anyways, compared to other shitty or Chinese one, your work is still incredible and peak, so giving you five stars is total deserved. I will continue to reading and giving my genuine reviews. Hope you consider my review:))))

Author, please continue writing this masterpiece. I honestly wonder why it isn't ranked even higher — truly deserves more recognition. Every detail feels perfect, especially the way you depict each fight scene so vividly. (Most fanfics write a few sentences superficially, making me feel so unsatisfied). And also, the way you’ve expanded Megumi’s skills is too well with such a deep understanding of the JJK world. Unlike other fanfics where the protagonist’s powers just appear out of nowhere, ignoring the logic of the original story.

Great job, bro. Keep doing[img=recommend]