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  • super_Man
    super_Mana month ago
    Replied to Gh0st00

    Suits: A Lawyer Surviving TV Chaos [Dropped] by thebigbang is the original it same as previous but it was dropped 2 months ago I think

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  • super_Man
    super_Mana month ago
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    I hope you don't drop the fic like the original Suits: A Lawyer Surviving TV Chaos [Dropped] by thebigbang. Till now it's a copy of this fic still ahead but it's dropped and not gonna be updated. I hope you continue it

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  • super_Man
    super_Man3 months ago
    Posted

    From first chapter it's clear it's gonna be a trash fic, racism , chinese superiority complex , no clear translation like it's done by Google translate , I mean just write in Chinese instead of pretending to be translating it and just post on some chinese preaching website, anyways I don't get how it can even get positive review when it's clearly fully trash

  • super_Man
    super_Man4 months ago
    Posted

    Well seems like the story is already completed so I guess I was lucky to read it whole and never had to wait for updates , but again I missed the anticipation for new chapter to update. Anyways amazing work, for those who have problem with mc , I mean imagine how annoyed and angry people gets stuck driving and we all are technically equal in term of basic human, now this is the world of mha and to increase more lore he made the mc have a omega level quirk, almost god like being why would he play with the rules of ants. The author did brilliant job in tracking the story till the end , the last chapter seemed rushed for the ending when considering the total length of fic but still I guess it was the most appropriate ending. Thank you author for this amazing fic as there are rarely any this good in mha.

  • super_Man
    super_Man4 months ago
    Posted

    Another a.i. trash piece I really tried to read it with open mind like an au , but repeated lines, cliche plot no world background resembles the show , mc perfect recall is just his way of saying yeah I know this even if it never happens , the writer seems to have just given prompt to gpt and said he wanted the regular same cliche story. Not worth it save your time and read some another good story

  • super_Man
    super_Man4 months ago
    Replied to Badass8642

    Make it one shot, use gacha power as scenario. Stick to a theme for that mini story, for example you made him sayain stick to that, use broly's anger as his weakness, you choose instinct build from gacha use his lack of physical power as weakness, balance them , and even you write op main character you can write in one shots because truth be told if you character too op story is already finished no matter what you bring in against. You got the ideas so use them in one shots instead and if one of them you really really like to write then make a story based on that one.

  • super_Man
    super_Man4 months ago
    Posted

    Worst fix in mha, ai slop , you could have made it one shots it would have been better, system play no fixed role, starting was good and then you let ai take over completely, future past and present make no sense, no character background, nothing matter, it could have been a one shot series instead

  • super_Man
    super_Man4 months ago
    Posted

    Stupid and basic. Writing quality section in review like the author did any writting, he just copy pasted chinese story, dud just changed mc name and made him indian instead of chinese, didn't change anything else in the story even if he had edited in his own style it would have been better but just copy pasting and changing two words is not writing. Story was gonna be bad offcourse it's chinese basic mc package that I already expected but worst thing is plagiarism. If you are just gonna copy everything then simply mention the source. Anyways I think even if you got the blessing of author at least you could have edited story according to Indian perspective if you made mc an Indian otherwise its just cheating.🤐🤐🫤🫤😵😵

  • super_Man
    super_Man5 months ago
    Posted

    One of the nicest fanfic based on sheldon. Not changing his core character but adding more to it. Episode by episode escalation and people touch is good. Solid work.

  • super_Man
    super_Man5 months ago
    Posted

    Soul less story. A.i. written make it a complete bore. No ups and down no thriller no love no hate no treacherous plot which asoiaf require. Its just an op character from day one doing whatever he wants and no character development you stacked power on characters without even utilising the power to deepest core. And you forgot which chracter had what power. Even if you write a bad story of you had written it yourself it would have been better than this one.anyways I liked cricket story of yours that's the reason I even read this fully otherwise from few chapter I would have just left it.