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Elfac04

Elfac04

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  • Elfac04
    Elfac046 months ago
    Replied to anggie_miller

    pareces real espero seas real y no un bot para que despues me una a tu Hi, I really enjoyed reading your story; the scenes were so clear that they instantly formed in my mind. Writing that feels this naturally visual is rare. I create Webtoon/Comic commissions, Manga, and Character/Cover Art. Whether you want a specific scene illustrated or a comic version explored, I’d be glad to discuss possibilities. Discord:

  • Elfac04
    Elfac046 months ago
    Replied to Elfac04

    este texto lo traduje con IA pa que mentir estoy en el trabajo asi que escribi algo y le dije a la IA que lo mandara a ingles para ponerlo aca. siendo sincero mi ingles es una basura osea puedo decir I am the poor writer facilmente pero para frases mas complejas es bueno XD la historia literalmente tenia esa estructura pero web novel la rechazo asi que imagina que si personas enfocadas en historias la rechazan pues desmotiva mas de lo que crees aun asi te mando la estructura de la historia

  • Elfac04
    Elfac046 months ago
    Replied to anggie_miller

    Dear Reader. To be honest, I don't think this story will be updated. Since it wasn't picked up by Webnovel, I set it aside, but I don't want to leave anyone hanging, so I’ll share the planned structure of the story with you. Arc 1: Erick and the girl he rescued travel the world. This arc focuses on world-building and the reason behind the name "Cursed Sword." The reason is that this world is rotten: corruption, slavery, etc. The arc ends with Erick dying while saving many people, as the girl watches helplessly from a distance. From there, the sword—hidden between the world of the living and the dead—endures Erick's final thoughts. Arc 2: This begins a bit later. The sword has lost its luster, eclipsed by such a chaotic world. At this point, war breaks out between demons and humans, and the kingdom summons a hero from another world. I’ll pause here to make a comment: yes, it’s true, this story is an isekai within a reincarnation; that’s why it was so extensive, though I suppose that doesn't quite work on Webnovel. Continuing on: the arc follows a very unusual sword-bearer; he actually supports the world's evil because he was once oppressed himself, yet he still helps others. We follow his journey through the kingdoms killing demons and monsters, until the girl who once accompanied the sword looks upon the hero with hatred. There is fight after fight, and the girl eventually escapes because the sword—now more conscious—refuses to kill her, literally dimming its own glow. Arc 3: This is near the end. The oppressed of the kingdoms fight for power. Throughout the story, the oppression was building up, leading to a war of Kingdom vs. Demons vs. Humans: a triple crusade, with the girl from the beginning leading the revolt. That’s as far as I had planned; anything beyond that, well... XD. However, I am working on another story if you'd like to read it. I’ll be uploading chapters soon, once I have enough to post regularly (at least 16k words so the publication doesn't stall). Here is how it begins; it’s an isekai. ________________________________________ The pristine white of the hero Kael’s armor—shining and majestic like the promise of a future for humanity—was now stained with that black, viscous liquid oozing from the metallic beings he fought. Even so, Kael did not waver. The scent persisted, sickening the mind of Kael, the strongest hero of his now-ruined ancient kingdom. He fought on. However, the same question always surfaced in his mind: "When?" It happened from one day to the next. From the Empire at the center of the continent, a light dyed the darkest night, alarming not only humans but also demons across the land. Then, the first thing that followed was the silence. Hundreds of messengers were sent by the kingdoms to see what had happened, but they received only silence; not a single one returned. The second thing that followed was the noise: the sound of heavy footsteps marching without rest. They were beings that neither slept nor ate. They called themselves the "Army of Salvation." ________________________________________ This is inspired by Doki Doki. All my stories focus on trying to break the fourth wall, but this one will do so even more. It’s a reincarnation inside a web novel that someone liked, so this is the beginning of the story—the prologue.

  • Elfac04
    Elfac046 months ago
    Replied to Dorothy_james009

    espera los bots pueden comentar algo distinto a lo que siempre dicen

  • Elfac04
    Elfac047 months ago
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    En especial cuando toca trabajo pesado eh

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  • Elfac04
    Elfac047 months ago
    Replied to jay_moore231

    ustedes son los unicos que me escriben Y_Y xd ajjaaja

  • Elfac04
    Elfac047 months ago
    Replied to expert_123

    Mi ingles no da para tanto o(≧口≦)o

  • Elfac04
    Elfac047 months ago
    Replied to Nameless89

    no se ingles Aaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!╰(‵□′)╯

Nai Wa: My Sunqu magic tastes like vomit (And there's no more rum)

Arthur, a man of no more than 30 years old, with a worn-out soul and an indolent spirit, is forced to change when the cruelest fate knocks on his door; his father's corpse and the misery of society weigh on him like a burden without respite. In a world where morality and values ​​​​fight to maintain the farce of a sapiens society, Arthur awakens his sunqu magic, an organ capable of controlling the energy that destroyed that world and simultaneously saved it, an energy that condenses not only physical power, but also political and economic power. In such a chaotic world, Arthur finds himself… Forget boring prose! Arthur is a mental child, and energy is just ultra-condensed magic, I think, or I don't know, honestly, I'm the /./ Now Arthur's power is strange: changing reality and at the same time, not being able to because the little boy can't handle so much power. I mean, why do you have the power if you can't use it? Nothing matters, and his way of speaking is so... I am Arthur, a man with two doctorates in melancholy and cheap poetry. We're in a book from some publishing house over 100 years old. Spoiler: Arthur is crazy, don't pay attention to him. *Spoiler 2, this one's mine, author* Honestly, I don't know how to write, so don't expect anything amazing. I also don't know English, so don't expect anything amazing again. And don't use periods. – Sorry again. Well, I don't know anything, just give it a chance. I don't know, maybe 10 chapters. I try to change the reading pace every now and then, so it'll probably be weird, but at least it'll pass the time. I already have the ending and the plot twists in mind, so I'm not writing as I go along most of the time, but the ending is already defined from chapters 1 and 2, so at least it'll be long.

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