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I thought this story had been abandoned, it's a pleasure to have it back sir.
Yay! Yuri time! (Oh, at least for as long as it lasts).
Yay! Toxic yuri and emotional dependency... I love it. .............................................. ..............................................
Hey, one question, does this story contain elements of cultivation or anything like that?
I'm using a translator, so please excuse any confusion. Well... uh, here's a review! Frankly, I've laughed a lot with this fanfic. I understand if some people don't like or enjoy this type of comedy. "There are colors for comedy!" Or was it for romance? Anyway, if I had to mention something I like about this fanfic so far, it would be that it blends comedy and serious moments very well, in my opinion. It keeps me constantly engaged. It's also worth mentioning how it portrays a rather gritty version of ninjas and their wars. The world is also rich with samurai lore. And what could I possibly say wrong with this story? I have no idea. I'm not a writer, so I can't comment on grammar or text structure, and perhaps all the trashy stories I've consumed in my time on this site have damaged my judgment quite a bit. If anything, I can say that I sometimes lost track of the conversation during chaotic moments, and that's about it, I think. Thank you for your work. Oh, and maybe I'll vent a little about this next thing; honestly, I don't care if the MC can destroy the universal balance with a fart or is as weak as a sea flea, but damn, I'm sick of flat personalities and them starting to get partners like they're Pokémon on a route. [The heroines hear my voice] Why the hell is something like this even classified? [You've gained an ability to attract gyarus] Damn it, if you can't write a relationship without those crutches, don't write it at all!... Well, what I'm trying to say is, no matter how silly or crazy your writing is, at least please make it fun. It was a moment of rage, sorry.
Where were you, brother Goldship!? Mizuno-Dono has been desecrated! (All my chips were on Goldship...).
How is this possible...? Did they skip over the long-awaited Uma-pyon? HERESY! (I was really hoping it was Goldship)
God, how I love this story.
For a moment I thought Renji would make a Megamind-style entrance.
I don't know what just happened, but excellent.