Joseph_Lopez_9761

Woah! Great Read! In just the few chapters you wrote, it kind of reads like a manga anime movie, but all in all, it is a mind thrilling read. Your action is spot on, but like this one person wrote if you only you explained or embellished a little more on Raizen's home/village your WebNovel will be complete. To be honest, maybe like two more paragraphs worth should do it. But everything else, like character establishment, action sequences, and detailed oriented scenes and cuts are all there. Good Work Sqair..