Dr_quack

I think that was the right call dude. Too much information at once could be overwhelming for most readers.

this novel is a hidden gem. the writing is truly immersive, the slow burn trope is excuted brilliantly here, the mysteries are really intriguing, the family dynamic are warm. the start sign system feels like a fresh of breath air and I'm really excited for the future. keep it up man.

vertically challenged, Imma steal that expression.

thanks for the kind words. in regards to the amnesia, I felt like it was the better choice for the story and it will be adressed in the future.

ngl, this is getting more and more intriguing

ayo pause.

seems like a nice family man. if something happen to them we riot.

for some reason the ice cream thing reminds me of dark coffee from shadow slave.

the concept is good, the writing is easy to digest with good pacing. this novel gives you a needed dose of emotions even tho it's still in its early stages. keep it up and you will make it big someday