Retter_innen

I love this story so far. Grammar is amongst the better ones on this site. And the entire setting is interesting and has a lot of Potential. The Multiverse travelling aspect seems to be solved better than in the other Story on here of a similar setting. The MC is also more humane and natural. Which I quite enjoy.

Ahahaha, he did it again ^^

What's the point of writing as something that has no impact on the Story? That's just wasting time...

Are you serious? Like with the Neville Broom event, he was literally present and his presence didn't change anything, not even the Dialogue. You literally copy pasted parts of the Chapter from the books, let Cassian Shadowbox in between, and kept copying. Someone else already pointed out that he had several options amongst his spells. Like use his illusion, or literally do the leviosa thing he did with Neville which is according to you more powerful than his Wingardium Leviosa. Either on the Troll or the Club if you decide to nerf it.

Yeah, the story is unfortunately getting to a point where it stops making Sense just to preserve the Canon events. Well that's where I drop it.