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Suggestion: Bottles of what? Beer, juice, etc.
Good line.
Suggestion: I might add I was taking her home from the hospital, driving my car down the busy highway or something..
Good description. :)
Suggestion: I might add how much they won by, like, 12 to 10 or something...
Maybe he's bi?
Now things are getting spicy!
Suggestion: I would add: lights her cigarette with her purple lighter or something.
Personally, I don't think simply is needed here; I would cut it out.
Here he really shows off his anger.