Erika_Kimmikoto

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Erika_Kimmikoto25d ago
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Suggestion: Bottles of what? Beer, juice, etc.
A few days had passed since he last spoke to Zabi. He'd been waiting for his memories to come back, even a glimpse to jog the rest. But nothing. He's never had memory loss just because he drank a few bottles. That alone was proof something happened.
The Exception Of His Rule: The Gay Boy's New Desire.
LGBT+ · E_vibes
Erika_Kimmikotoa month ago
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Good line.
A little power here. A little cheating there. A little support from your Connection Source upstairs.
I Have Died Ten Times And The Universe Still Ships Us Together
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Erika_Kimmikotoa month ago
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Suggestion: I might add I was taking her home from the hospital, driving my car down the busy highway or something..
That night, while I was taking her home from the hospital, I'd already made up my mind.
I Have Died Ten Times And The Universe Still Ships Us Together
Urban · Venomkiss
Erika_Kimmikotoa month ago
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Good description. :)
Those seven damn days nearly killed me too. Kaira was everything to me. Watching her cry felt like somebody was slowly twisting a knife inside my ribs. That shit hurt.
I Have Died Ten Times And The Universe Still Ships Us Together
Urban · Venomkiss
Erika_Kimmikotoa month ago
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Suggestion: I might add how much they won by, like, 12 to 10 or something...
The locker room was buzzing with happy players. They had just won a game.
The Exception Of His Rule: The Gay Boy's New Desire.
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Erika_Kimmikotoa month ago
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Maybe he's bi?
He was gay. Zabi was a woman. He wasn't meant to be attracted to her.
The Exception Of His Rule: The Gay Boy's New Desire.
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Erika_Kimmikotoa month ago
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Now things are getting spicy!
She sits upright, taking in the sight of him sprawled out on his bed as his cock leaks. She leans down, taking his cock down in one go. Persha cries out, body vibrating in pleasure. She sucks him off, fingers circling his hole, her thumb brushing against him, and he cums. She doesn't stop sucking his cock as she drives him into overstimulation.
The Exception Of His Rule: The Gay Boy's New Desire.
LGBT+ · E_vibes
Erika_Kimmikotoa month ago
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Suggestion: I would add: lights her cigarette with her purple lighter or something.
Zabi doesn't laugh with him, instead she lights her cigarette, takes a puff.
The Exception Of His Rule: The Gay Boy's New Desire.
LGBT+ · E_vibes
Erika_Kimmikotoa month ago
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Personally, I don't think simply is needed here; I would cut it out.
So he simply let her walk him toward the nearest bathroom to cool off.
The Exception Of His Rule: The Gay Boy's New Desire.
LGBT+ · E_vibes
Erika_Kimmikotoa month ago
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Here he really shows off his anger.
"Let go, you bastard," Persha shouted again. "Get off. Get the fuck off me."
The Exception Of His Rule: The Gay Boy's New Desire.
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The Sangria War

Are you old enough for a Sangria? Then you are old enough for this grisly novel about multiple stories of trauma and survival. Merlot Jupiter is he a creation or is he an author? James Evergreen is the ruler of the Intermarium, and he has two children: Ethan from his wife Leslie and Lolita from Charlotte, a woman with whom he had an affair. Who will become the next ruler of Intermarium, a third-world country that is already crippled by enormous amounts of debt? Dan is from Intermarium, drafted into war, and his worst fear is that his son Felix will follow the same fate as him. Merlot watches the news to see Borealia and Uncle Sam fighting about tariffs.

Erika_Kimmikoto · War

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Erika_Kimmikoto · Fantasy

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