Eriac_Caire

Gostei muito, achei uma mistura de dandandan com Sanda

I highly recommend it because it’s very detailed and so sad, and the writing is great and well-crafted. If you haven’t read it yet, you definitely should :3. I think it’s really well-written and well-done. Each chapter I read made me want to read more and more. The story is so rich and evolving, and what’s even better is that it doesn’t need a lot of dialogue to be a good story. It’s rich in details. I think all authors on Webnovel should read this because it’s a masterpiece.

Chapter 3 is really good. As you said, it’s a bridge between the past and the future, and I really liked it. I actually felt sad while reading it, so detailed. I loved the story, it's very well-written. One critique is that you put too much content in a single paragraph, try to improve that. As promised, I did the review, okay? The story is really good, and I highly recommend it!

I really liked it. It brought such sadness just by reading, and on top of being very detailed, it felt like the protagonist was seeing his life in fragments. He built everything just to die in the end. I think we really don’t take anything from this world. It’s very sad, but it's the truth

I could feel the sadness just by reading. Your writing style is great and very detailed!

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Sure! I’ll go there and do a review, probably of about 5 chapters. I’ll try to post more chapters too, just that time hasn’t really helped. Thanks!

Thank you! I tried to make the characters’ interactions as natural as possible, not awkward at all. Thanks for commenting!

Thank you!

Thanks, I get that it can be a little confusing, since the story does come off a bit unclear at times. Yeah, I decided to show it more through scenes to make the story more detailed, and it might take me a little while to release new chapters. I’ll try to keep the same writing style. On Wednesday I’ll go comment on your story—just tell me the title of your romance.