Christine_Atchley

I love all this authors books, but content repetition is just lazy editing. At least we didn't miss anything...

more like Captain Planet

I've already read ALL of this authors other books and they know what they are doing in this genre. I do see a hint of some tropes from past books, but it doesn't bother me at all because I enjoy those particular way of handling things. Absolutely read this one!

So far, you are absolutely one of my favorite authors in this genre. Please don't quit part way like a lot of authors... I've already read all of your other books on here!!

although the content is undoubtedly important at this time... repeating it twice seems unnecessary... plus I feel like when that happens, we might have missed something as well

Every chapter is filled with so much space. one word! space! the next word! response! the audacity! we get it! Bai Zihan... Is audacious! Ridiculous! Does every chapter have to be like this?! Can we have a chapter of full paragraphs, that is a little more than someone reacting to our Zihan'er? We're in on the joke, it doesn't need to be spelled out like this every single time. It feels lazy... I know the author is trying to stretch out the story, but I feel like there's still lots of story to tell if I'm being honest. I don't feel like it needs to be milked to death! It makes your readers feel taken advantage of...

repeated content! arghhhhh

I always book mark the cultivation realms in every book to keep them straight. But I'd rather just have more words per chapter. But that's okay . You're doing great! Interesting book. Refreshing spin!

this whole chapter was nothing but filler.... I'm frustrated because that generally isn't the vibe of this book...

Finally, a chapter with a little meat.