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Hm what should I say the plot was ok even though a classic cliche which we see in a lot of ‘trash to king’ type novels here. The character design is good i'd say . But i dont really like the naming sense of the author and world building. Surnames are terrible , like overly glossy , along with most of the names from continents to house names and also excessive amount of races in the novel (elves,dwarves, demons etc) though only in name with no unique characteristics . Fight scenes are like completely AI with a bit of meager tweaking which is clearly visible btw. So yeah , the setup wasn't bad but i eventually didn't like how it progresses especially bland dialogues and interactions which fail to convey the respective emotions .
too much unnecessary information and constantly justifying his ‘accomplishments’ and ‘failures’ based on past life. Wasnt he just an orphan with cancer who died early?
I'd say a bit too overdramatic for me. Like it's not bad but the horror really comes off more as descriptive than immersive you know .