Abhishek_Jain_5352

Very out of context historically unless author is going for fiction. Also what kind of barbaric culture would be spread from central Asia? I mean just reading the synopsis makes me feel that this book is not going to be good.

I don't get it why the MC in the starting acts very stupidly while interacting with his sister. If She can be so smart at 6 then he can be way more smarter as he is an adult in a Childs body. Also very heavily dependent on System. I mean it looks like without system the MC would just be a loser with no good innante traits. Having a system in a Kingdom Building novel doesn't work well.