Brody_Sanford

Author, how can he act like this around a woman that 🍇’d him and is utterly remorseless about it? The writing has been good. The story was interesting until Daphne went full sociopath

Author, what do you mean “cross the line” because you definitely implied she 🍇’d him but the narrative keeps dancing around it or distancing us from it He should hate her. She’s a monster

What? How was this not implied 🍇?

The comments aren’t clear about whether the MC was 🍇’d This line clearly implies forced sex

Crossed a line!?!?!? She 🍇’d him!!!!! She a monster and I hope there’s karma in this story

Predator + predator

Not boring; not filler — good sh!t

Great detail! Definitely breathes life into the story, character and world