Brody_Sanford

Ugh… this is even more ridiculous. Who knows these specs off the top of their head? If you got isekai’d, even if you have the help of the smartest person in that world and you spent days explaining what a smart phone can do, that doenst even remotely mean that super smarter person could then turn around and build you a smart phone Ok, other rant over. I’ll stop now

If you’re a really good student with an impressive memory, I accept that the MC could sketch out a basic internal combustion engine like earlier in the story, but having the ability to reproduce high-end tactical sniper rifle blue prints? That could then actually be followed… Not believable That kind of weapon requires such precision that even small imperfections in the design, manufacturing, or materials and it might just explode when you pull the trigger Ok, rant over

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Oh, yes. Very honorable — lie to someone about it being a suicide mission But have to agree that the poor girl should have seen it coming

See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

That seems ridiculous since it punishes his witches too? And wasn’t the inquisition lady supposed to curse him to never hurt anyone again!?!?!? PRETTY COVENIENT THAT SHE FORGOT TO CAST THAT SPELL

Author, I really liked world dragons heir, but this story is giving off “I really didn’t know where the plot was going while I wrote it” vibes

Now he’s getting branded!?!? This is messed up; might need to drop

Pretty messed up that the girls are just going along with this. And the fact that the MC is some calm and accepting in these situations is not believable

Wow… he’s got no weapon and no training for this situation. They could be sending him to his death… again we’re just jumping over what seem to be important details to me; but I guess he has no choice