Cartergame

As a father of 2 daughters, I completely understand, appreciate, & approve this chapter's authenticity. 💐✨️💯

Are you kidding? The political lines are being redrawn in minutes & hours...not just days or even weeks. Alexios is the ultimate savvy political leader and he understands Power.

I drove back home today after seeing my Mom & dealing with a family member with terminal cancer & only weeks before he passes. This hit me in the Feels so hard that I'm crying in the car alone in construction traffic .😭😭😭😭😭 Well written. Damn.

Karmic Justice

RESPECTFULLY, I DISAGREE. WHOLEHARTEDLY. ENJOY THIS EPIC TALE & Have a coke or a donut or something.

Brilliant plot points. Cutthroat Corporate Guild intrigue in the flashback... This story is epic and you're a helluva writer. NICE.

Every chapter is awesome... but when you write like this? It's 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Thanks for the chapter!

What I really love about this story-- I really appreciate the World building, the monsters & their abilities to be gained, the different Characters (Good, bad, & everyone in between), the multiple adventuring groups with overlapping goals, the setup of various villain groups as well.... These things are all incredible! I just wish you'd run each chapter through an editor for grammar and better translation because sometimes it gets confusing. But, keep writing because this is a great storyline worth the time! 😊💪💯

Negotiations were a Snoozefest? Not at all! They're extremely enjoyable.