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Really good here. Loved the confrontation. I had been wondering how Melissa would just let everything go when she was carrying the most pain. Also, I’m sure this is coming but with the power of Phei’s family, that we’ve just got the tip of the iceberg, they have to want revenge for what happened. I’ve been curious for a while why they allowed it to happen- Grandma had to know everything going on but yet she didn’t act, didn’t allow any of her people to act so there has to be a bigger play here. Love love love this story.

Didn’t she get dressed before she asked the last question?

Did this story get dropped?

I don’t leave reviews on anything but this book is something else. The story itself is wildly imaginative and even if your not into the very surface baseline of the harem building or Milfs the story is so much richer and deeper than that. The world building and character development (that full disclosure I’ve cussed the author for drawing out and then repented) are incredible. The emotion that the author draws out of the characters through each back story pulls at all your emotions. From chapter to chapter you laugh and cry as both the joy and pain of the characters are made real. At the current pace to get all 7 battle angels and their daughters even described might take 2k chapters but I’m all in for the ride. Thank you this is truly a gem.

Welcome back. Keep the chapters coming. Cool story

Is there a reason the updates for the chapters aren’t coming? Also in the chapter index shows chapter titles for a different book.

What happened to inventory? Has the system completely gone away?