Mr_Bogus

Dunno what happened, but this chapter seems rather... clunky? Compared to the others? The structure and pace is off somehow, at least in my opinion...

I am unsure, if this was written with AI or without. Good: Does not seem to be translated from Chinese. Seems to be a genuine new story. Not so good: One chapter protagonist is in LA, next chapter his Clinic is in Brooklyn, NY. Makes no sense to me. Unfortunately

Rose owns Disney? What? Did i miss something?

Who dat?

Super Story. Was not that enthusiastic in the beginning. Many TWD Stories are just not for me. But this is different. I am no military type, but this feels like a realistic version of what would happen if the worst happened and the dead rise again. I really like it. It is a def recommendation

Unfortunately, the language is just very... hm... let's call it 'clunky'. Even if you are no native speaker (and the author is not), you can get help to smooth your writing. Heck, AI might even help you there... The story itself is quite fun and i like the idea behind the story.

I think so, the medal of honor is the highest medal for valor in the military in the US. The Prez has to hand it to you. But whatever, that is what happens, if one is not native to the country the story takes place in. Who knows all these details...

Isn't that like a medal only the president of the US can give you?

Terry is in the Hospital with the dirty cop is he not?

Interesting idea for that story. MC reincarnates with OP Powers. At this point the story could go in many directions. Comedy, Fantasy, Thriller... But the author choose to make this story into something a psychologist would use in his training. The MC is so indecisive, so scared of his own shadow that most of the stuff he is doing is just lamenting what could go wrong and so on. Every chapter, every paragraph is the same thing, over and over and over and over and over again. It get's annoying and really stops the flow of the story. The reader could read about the time running out on his lies for like 15 chapters in a 25 chapter story so far but still no development there. At some point the author will have to have the MC sit down and take a shit. All this waiting for it is annyoing as f.