Oways_Ezlitni

Where are you up to rn

yes you should definitely it's one of the best novels on this app

love to see it yeah it's deffo peak it's got potential to be one of the best novels on this app the writing is spectacular and Azriel is easily one of the best written MC's I've seen. This should defo be more popular

dw none of this actually happens

I'd really love to see more of Azriels family and how they dealt with him when they presumed he was dead and how it emotionally broke them as i feel we didn't get enough in them in the earlier chapters id defo love to see more of Celestina too and i can already tell you plan to explore her charvster more so I'm excited for that but that doesn't mean i want Azriel to be neglected I think rhe balance youve got going atm is perfect.

Yo Crypth i I already think your story is amazing and it's personally my favourite but i think if this 1 improvement could make the story even better. The side cast is strong and well written and they're definitely a lot better than majority of the novels on here but sometimes i feel like they get overshadowed because Azriel is so amazingly written and such a goated character but one way you could make them hit even harder is by giving us more access to their inner worlds. Like how you know in NGE when they psychologically break down its characters, it doesn’t just show their actions — it lets us understand the fears, insecurities, contradictions, and pain underneath them. So i think More pov shifts ,More narration or inner monologue could really help with that, especially in moments where a character is struggling, hiding something, or acting against what they actually feel. It would make them feel even more human, because we’d get to see not just who they are on the outside, but what’s quietly going on inside them. This is just a way i think could make the story even better and i know you can easily do it as Azriel is easly one of the best mc's I've ever seen and you've already incorporated these elements into his character by constantly physcologically breaking him down and i think if this was incorporated into some of the side characters it could improve them lmk your thoughts.

no escape for azriel there is only more suffering

it was worth it, the only novel I'll actually spend my money on as it is always peak now I need more.

tftc 🐐 that money spent was worth it but now I'm out of premium chapters no now i have to wait again 😭 man these last few chapters have been so amazing and emotional

I gave in tftc