samonster_110
I can’t think small — my stories must go beyond ordinary, shaking you from the inside and sending tremors from head to toe, leaving you saying, “What a ride!”
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samonster_1102 months agoReplied to Mr_Diddybecause of no response
- samonster_1107 months agoCommented
I am a new author, and many shitheads say that. Show, don't tell. What I see here is both show and tell. Now I can think of adding descriptions like this. in the middle of a chapter where it is needed.
- samonster_1108 months agoCommented
If anyone finds it pathetic, I just want to say: he is a kid now, man. It's his pre-phase. he will farm his aura when he grows. This is a lengthy story, so please bear with me. I know you all, Jinwo fans. or maybe some other character's fan. Give my story time to grow its characters. You will love my story when you are determined to read it to the end.
- samonster_1108 months agoReplied to Genius_Void
oh is that soo, so it's good thing or bad thing . i know i did mistakes early in the story, so what you wanna say , say it clearly
- samonster_1108 months agoReplied to Genius_Void
At that time, yes
This paragraph has been deleted. - samonster_1108 months agoReplied to Genius_Void
Hmm man, she is playing along too, stupido. do i have to describe that too
- samonster_1108 months agoReplied to Genius_Void
Sadly, yes,i forgot to put Rose Desperation here. So, along with you i wanna tell all readers that. Rose is an orphan girl. Everyone in her place treats her as nothing and a burden. She doesn't have any friends.She always used to sit on the cliff at night to counter her boredom . She prayed that she wanted a real friend, and that time she found Auren. She is not some classy, popular girl; she is broken too.i made a blunder introducing rose without backstory at 1st. if you know who rose really is, then there is no point to find this wierd.
This paragraph has been deleted. - samonster_1108 months agoReplied to Genius_Void
Hmm I see your point. You are right. I wrote 4 chapters in one day at that time. that was a blunder. I finish Auren and Rose moment too hurry.
This paragraph has been deleted. - samonster_1108 months agoReplied to GhostHound
- samonster_1108 months agoReplied to Hypnos_the1
If you dropped this novel, may I know the reason? It will help me grow
